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     It’s a few days into the first week of school, another mediocre day. It’s sixth hour and everyone is antsy to get home. Keana is presented with the question ‘Would you ever consider photography as a career?’ She has been asked this question only because she has just showed a profound interest in the subject. When the 14-year-old opened her mouth to answer, she hesitated. “Well… I don’t know.” She spoke and then a few moments later continued to elaborate. She described it specifically as a hobby, but it seemed like more than that to her. “It’s very fun for me, I don’t have an exact reason, but I love nature and taking pictures gives me a better memory.” This seemed perfect for Keana because she’s infatuated by the color blue. By showing an interest in nature, she can photograph the sky as much as she pleases. She was then asked why she wouldn’t pursue the hobby as a career, was it because she didn’t believe she had the right talent? “It’s not that I’m not talented enough. I know there are other things that I’m even better at than photography.” Even though Keana shows a deep interest in photography she seems to have a set and positive mind that she’ll be able to find another career path that she believes will accentuate her other talents even more. “Photography is more a hobby right now.”  

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  1. What are the other things Keana is talented in?? What are all the things Keana has Photographed??

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  2. Your transitions for the quotes are very well written, you were able to introduce your quotes seamlessly, which allowed the story to flow nicely.

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  3. I have known keana for awhile but i never got the chance to talk to her about her life and stuff, but thankfully with this it helps me.

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  4. I like how you focused solely on the photography aspect of Keanas life, and I think you took the story in an interesting route. I like it!

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  5. You're wording for this profile is perfect! The flow and everything made me love this profile and for sure want to finish reading. Hearing different perspectives on photography is very interesting to me. Very nice quotes that were a very good add to the story!

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  6. The transitions and the wording in this was great. Also, I thought you did a good job with making it flow. Also, I enjoyed reading about the different aspects of photography, and found it very interesting.

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  7. This is very interesting, i think its cool how you focused on her photography but i think you could add how she got started, or what her other talents are when she said she was better at other things than photography.

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  8. You did an incredible job with this profile! I really don't see any flaws in this one. You did a great job covering every angle of her interests and passions.

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  9. Wow! Great job on the profile! Your wording is on point! Fantastic job!

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